Jenna Frenzel

Ok guys, how's this: A warm summer’s day, a harsh winter’s night; these things, like all other objects we can see, touch, make up the world. Along with these items ...

Thank you all for these comments! I hope to revise this, when I find the time....

Funny I read it so long ago that I barely rmembered the name of the book. :? Does it sound too much like it?

Thanks, I'll incorporate that.

It was the program I edtied it in. I couldn't figure out how to make a solid dash in it. :oops:

I agree with the above comments: I like your thoughts, but the punctuation and grammar made it difficult to read. Try giving it a good read-through.